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This is the usual Wigner crystal representation as mentionned in our previous works.
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This is the usual Wigner crystal representation as mentionned in our previous works.
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The asymptotic behavior is then correct in the large-$R$ limit.
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The asymptotic behavior is then correct in the large-$R$ limit.
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However, the coefficients do not exactly match the exact ones.
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However, the coefficients do not exactly match the exact ones.
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From a numerical and practical point of view, we have not found that enforcing the exact values does not improve the results.
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From a numerical and practical point of view, we have not found that enforcing the exact values does improve the results.
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Actually, it usually worsen them as enforcing the correct coefficients in the large-$R$ limit usually deteriorates the results for intermediate $R$ values.
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Actually, it usually worsen them as enforcing the correct coefficients in the large-$R$ limit usually deteriorates the results for intermediate $R$ values.
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Finally, let us mention that the logarithmic behavior does not occur for the correlation energy.
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Finally, let us mention that the logarithmic behavior does not occur for the correlation energy.
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It only occurs in the thermodynamic limit (where the number of electrons gets very large) in the Hartree-exchange term.
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It only occurs in the thermodynamic limit (where the number of electrons gets very large) in the Hartree-exchange term.
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I wonder if an explanatory diagram for the embedding scheme might clarify my thinking here, particularly if my thinking is wrong! }
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I wonder if an explanatory diagram for the embedding scheme might clarify my thinking here, particularly if my thinking is wrong! }
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\alert{As mentioned in the original manuscript, the impurity carries the weight dependence of the functional.
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\alert{As mentioned in the original manuscript, the impurity carries the weight dependence of the functional.
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Performing a simple gedanken experiment, one can imagine that, in the infinite system, the excitation will occur locally, i.e., on the impurity.
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Performing a simple gedanken experiment, one can imagine that, in the infinite system, the excitation occurs locally, i.e., on the impurity.
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Therefore, we can assume, as a first approximation, that the weight dependence will originate mainly from this impurity, most of the bath being unaffected by this local excitation. This is, roughly speaking, the philosophy that we have followed.
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Therefore, we can assume, as a first approximation, that the weight dependence will originate mainly from this impurity, most of the bath being unaffected by this local excitation. This is, roughly speaking, the philosophy that we have followed.
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We believe this is also the reviewer's way of thinking.
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We believe this is also the reviewer's way of thinking.
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We have added a figure to illustrate this in the revised version of the manuscript.}
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We have added a figure to illustrate this in the revised version of the manuscript.}
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{Page 7: Another diagram suggestion: unfamiliar readers might be helped by a pedagogical diagram of your box systems, to help folks see how the different box lengths correspond to different correlation-strength regimes. }
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{Page 7: Another diagram suggestion: unfamiliar readers might be helped by a pedagogical diagram of your box systems, to help folks see how the different box lengths correspond to different correlation-strength regimes. }
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\alert{Very good suggestion. Accordingly, we have added a figure showing the electron density for a very small box and a very large box.
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\alert{Very good suggestion. Accordingly, we have added a figure showing the electron density for a very small box and a very large box.
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This illustrates how electrons localize when the density gets smaller.}
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This illustrates how electrons localize when the density gets smaller, and how the density has the tendency to be more uniform for small boxes.}
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\item
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{Page 7: Does strong correlation always result in non-linear ghosts uncorrected by the GIC-eLDA, or is it particularly difficult or changed by the embedding scheme somehow?
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{Page 7: Does strong correlation always result in non-linear ghosts uncorrected by the GIC-eLDA, or is it particularly difficult or changed by the embedding scheme somehow?
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of the crossover point. We were not able to rationalize this observation
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of the crossover point. We were not able to rationalize this observation
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further but we still mention in the revised manuscript that it is an
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further but we still mention in the revised manuscript that it is an
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illustration of the importance of both the density and the weights in
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illustration of the importance of both the density and the weights in
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the evaluation of individual energies within an ensemble.}\manu{Do
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the evaluation of individual energies within an ensemble.}
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you agree?}
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{Page 8: If the authors have evidence of behavior between $w=(0,0)$ and the equiensemble, instead of just these endpoints, that would be interesting to mention for the eDFT crowd. }
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{Page 8: If the authors have evidence of behavior between $w=(0,0)$ and the equiensemble, instead of just these endpoints, that would be interesting to mention for the eDFT crowd. }
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the path was just split in two parts: a first one where $w_2=0$ and
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the path was just split in two parts: a first one where $w_2=0$ and
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$0\leq w_1\leq 1/3$, and a second one where $w_1=1/3$ and $0\leq w_2\leq
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$0\leq w_1\leq 1/3$, and a second one where $w_1=1/3$ and $0\leq w_2\leq
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1/3$. For clarity, this is now mentioned explicitly in the revised
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1/3$. For clarity, this is now mentioned explicitly in the revised
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manuscrit before commenting on the plots.}\manu{OK?}
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manuscrit before commenting on the plots.}
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\item
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\item
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{Are there similar issues with combining HF exchange with LDA C as seen in the ground-state?
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{Are there similar issues with combining HF exchange with LDA C as seen in the ground-state?
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supplemental material, similar issues appear for excited states.
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supplemental material, similar issues appear for excited states.
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Interestingly, increasing the ensemble weights (which of course cannot
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Interestingly, increasing the ensemble weights (which of course cannot
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be done in conventional ground-state DFT) seems to reduce
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be done in conventional ground-state DFT) seems to reduce
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errors}\manu{We need to check the tables in the SI}
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errors}
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%\manu{We need to check the tables in the SI}
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\item
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\item
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{Figure 3 discussion: Will eLDA always overestimate double excitations?
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{Figure 3 discussion: Will eLDA always overestimate double excitations?
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\alert{As mentioned in the original manuscript (see Results and Discussion section), we believe that it might be a consequence of how we constructed the eLDA functional, as the weight dependence of the eLDA functional is based on a two-electron uniform electron gas.
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\alert{As mentioned in the original manuscript (see Results and Discussion section), we believe that it might be a consequence of how we constructed the eLDA functional, as the weight dependence of the eLDA functional is based on a two-electron uniform electron gas.
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We do not think this is due to the uniformity of its density, though.
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We do not think this is due to the uniformity of its density, though.
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Incorporating a $N$-dependence in the functional through the curvature of the Fermi hole might be valuable in this respect.
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Incorporating a $N$-dependence in the functional through the curvature of the Fermi hole might be valuable in this respect.
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This is left for future work.}\manu{Could we argue that the
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This is left for future work.
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difference in density between the ground and the excited states is
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Besides, the difference in density between the ground and the excited states is not substantial in 1D systems, which makes the effect of the second term of Eqn 51 quite small.}
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not that substantial? Or the deviations cancel out after integration? The
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question does not seem to be focused on the functional itself but more
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on the evaluation of this term for a system (boxium) that is not
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uniform. What do you think?}
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{Figure 6: Do the ground-state and equiensemble results for doubles converge as $N$ goes to infinity?}
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{Figure 6: Do the ground-state and equiensemble results for doubles converge as $N$ goes to infinity?}
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be exact for any \textit{uniform}
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be exact for any \textit{uniform}
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system, the
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system, the
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density-functional correlation components $\be{c}{(K)}(\n{}{})$ are
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density-functional correlation components $\be{c}{(K)}(\n{}{})$ are
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weight-\textit{independent}, unlike in the exact theory \cite{Fromager_2020}.
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weight-\textit{independent}, unlike in the exact theory. \cite{Fromager_2020}
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As discussed further in Sec.~\ref{sec:eDFA}, these components can be
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As discussed further in Sec.~\ref{sec:eDFA}, these components can be
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extracted from a
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extracted from a
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finite uniform electron gas model for which density-functional correlation excitation
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finite uniform electron gas model for which density-functional correlation excitation
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energy will be treated at the
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energy will be treated at the
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DFT level while we rely on HF for the exchange part.
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DFT level while we rely on HF for the exchange part.
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This is different from the usual context where both exchange and
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This is different from the usual context where both exchange and
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correlation are treated at the LDA level which gives compensation of
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correlation are treated at the LDA level which provides key error compensation features.
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errors. Despite the errors
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Despite the errors
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that might be introduced into the ensemble energy within such a scheme,
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that might be introduced into the ensemble energy within such a scheme,
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cancellations may actually occur when computing excitation energies,
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cancellations may actually occur when computing excitation energies,
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which are energy {\it differences}.}
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which are energy \textit{differences}.}
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\manu{Manu: I changed a bit and complemented your sentence. Is this fine?}
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The resulting KS-eLDA ensemble energy obtained via Eq.~\eqref{eq:min_with_HF_ener_fun}
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The resulting KS-eLDA ensemble energy obtained via Eq.~\eqref{eq:min_with_HF_ener_fun}
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reads
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reads
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One may naturally wonder about the physical content of the above correlation energy
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One may naturally wonder about the physical content of the above correlation energy
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expressions. It is in fact difficult to readily distinguish from
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expressions. It is in fact difficult to readily distinguish from
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Eqs.~(\ref{eq:Xic}) and (\ref{eq:Upsic}) purely (uncoupled) individual
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Eqs.~\eqref{eq:Xic} and \eqref{eq:Upsic} purely (uncoupled) individual
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contributions from mixed ones. For that purpose, we may
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contributions from mixed ones. For that purpose, we may
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consider a density regime which has a weak deviation from the uniform
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consider a density regime which has a weak deviation from the uniform
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one. In such a regime, where eLDA is a reasonable approximation, the
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one. In such a regime, where eLDA is a reasonable approximation, the
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an individual-density-functional correlation energy where the density-functional
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an individual-density-functional correlation energy where the density-functional
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correlation energy per particle is approximated by the ensemble one for
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correlation energy per particle is approximated by the ensemble one for
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all the states within the ensemble. \manurev{This perturbation expansion
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all the states within the ensemble. \manurev{This perturbation expansion
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is of course less relevant for the (more realistic) systems that exhibit significant
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is of course less relevant for (more realistic) systems that exhibit significant
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deviations from the uniform
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deviations from the uniform
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density regime. Nevertheless, it
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density regime. Nevertheless, it
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gives more insight into the eLDA approximation and it becomes useful when
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gives more insight into the eLDA approximation and it becomes useful when
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\includegraphics[width=\linewidth]{rho}
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\includegraphics[width=\linewidth]{rho}
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\caption{
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\caption{
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\titou{Ground-state one-electron density $\n{}{}(x)$ of 4-boxium (\ie, $N = 4$) for $L = \pi/32$ (left) and $L = 32\pi$ (right).
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\titou{Ground-state one-electron density $\n{}{}(x)$ of 4-boxium (\ie, $N = 4$) for $L = \pi/32$ (left) and $L = 32\pi$ (right).
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In the weak correlation regime (small box length), the one-electron density is much more delocalized than in the strong correlation regime (large box length).}
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In the weak correlation regime (small box length), the one-electron density is much more delocalized and uniform than in the strong correlation regime (large box length), where a Wigner crystal starts to appear. \cite{Rogers_2017,Rogers_2016}}
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Concerning the ensemble calculations, two sets of weight are tested: the zero-weight
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Concerning the ensemble calculations, two sets of weight are tested: the zero-weight
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(ground-state) limit where $\bw = (0,0)$ and the
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(ground-state) limit where $\bw = (0,0)$ and the
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equi-triensemble (or equal-weight state-averaged) limit where $\bw = (1/3,1/3)$.
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equi-triensemble (or equal-weight state-averaged) limit where $\bw = (1/3,1/3)$.
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\titou{Note that a zero-weight calculation does correspond to a
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\titou{Note that a zero-weight calculation does correspond to a ground-state KS calculation with $100\%$ exact exchange and LDA correlation.}
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\trashEF{conventional} ground-state KS calculation with \manu{$100\%$} exact exchange and LDA correlation.}
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\section{Results and discussion}
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\section{Results and discussion}
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correlation is strong. \manurev{The latter ensemble energy is computed
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correlation is strong. \manurev{The latter ensemble energy is computed
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as the weighted
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Eq.~(\ref{eq:Ew-eLDA})]. Therefore, its
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Eq.~\eqref{eq:Ew-eLDA}]. Therefore, its
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curvature can only originate from the weight dependence of the
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curvature can only originate from the weight dependence of the
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individual energies.
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Note that such a dependence does not exist in the exact theory. Here,
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as $\ew{2}$ increases. The variations in the ensemble
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as $\ew{2}$ increases. The variations in the ensemble
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weights are essentially linear or quadratic.
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weights are essentially linear or quadratic.
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\manurev{This can be rationalized as follows. As readily seen from
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\manurev{This can be rationalized as follows. As readily seen from
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Eqs.~(\ref{eq:EI-eLDA}) and (\ref{eq:ind_HF-like_ener}), the individual
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HF-like energies do not depend explicitly on the weights, which means
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HF-like energies do not depend explicitly on the weights, which means
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that the above-mentioned variations originate from the eLDA correlation
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that the above-mentioned variations originate from the eLDA correlation
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functional [second and third terms on the right-hand side of
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Eq.~(\ref{eq:EI-eLDA})]. If, for analysis purposes, we consider the
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Eq.~\eqref{eq:EI-eLDA}]. If, for analysis purposes, we consider the
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Taylor expansions around the uniform density regime in
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Eqs.~(\ref{eq:Taylor_exp_ind_corr_ener_eLDA}) and
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\eqref{eq:Taylor_exp_DDisc_term}, contributions with an explicit weight
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dependence still remain after summation. As both the ensemble density and
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the ensemble correlation energy per particle vary linearly with the
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regime [see the right panel of Fig. \ref{fig:EIvsW}], thus illustrating
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regime [see the right panel of Fig.~\ref{fig:EIvsW}], thus illustrating
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weights, in the evaluation of individual energies within
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