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@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ In other words, memory effects are absent from the xc functional which is assume
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Third and more importantly in the present context, a major issue of
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TD-DFT actually originates directly from the choice of the (ground-state) xc functional, and more specifically, the possible (not to say likely) substantial variations in the quality of the excitation energies for two different choices of xc functionals.
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Because of its popularity, approximate TD-DFT has been studied extensively by the community, and some researchers have quickly unveiled various theoretical and practical deficiencies.
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Because of its popularity, approximate TD-DFT has been studied \alert{extensively}, and some researchers have quickly unveiled various theoretical and practical deficiencies.
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For example, TD-DFT has problems with charge-transfer \cite{Tozer_1999,Dreuw_2003,Sobolewski_2003,Dreuw_2004,Maitra_2017} and Rydberg \cite{Tozer_1998,Tozer_2000,Casida_1998,Casida_2000,Tozer_2003} excited states (the excitation energies are usually drastically underestimated) due to the wrong asymptotic behaviour of the semi-local xc functional.
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The development of range-separated hybrids provides an effective solution to this problem. \cite{Tawada_2004,Yanai_2004}
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From a practical point of view, the TD-DFT xc kernel is usually considered as static instead of being frequency dependent.
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@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ Their dependence on the density is determined from the ensemble density constrai
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\end{equation}
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Note that the original decomposition \cite{Gross_1988b} shown in Eq.~\eqref{eq:FGOK_decomp}, where the
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conventional (weight-independent) Hartree functional
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\beq
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\beq \label{eq:Hartree}
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\E{\Ha}{}[\n{}{}]=\frac{1}{2} \iint \frac{\n{}{}(\br{}) \n{}{}(\br{}')}{\abs{\br{}-\br{}'}} d\br{} d\br{}'
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\eeq
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is separated
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@ -390,24 +390,24 @@ We will also adopt the usual decomposition, and write down the weight-dependent
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where $\e{\ex}{\bw{}}(\n{}{})$ and $\e{\co}{\bw{}}(\n{}{})$ are the
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weight-dependent density-functional exchange and correlation energies
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per particle, respectively.
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\manu{As shown in Sec.~\ref{subsubsec:weight-dep_corr_func}, the weight
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\alert{As shown in Sec.~\ref{subsubsec:weight-dep_corr_func}, the weight
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dependence of the correlation energy can be extracted from a FUEG model. In order to make the resulting weight-dependent
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correlation functional truly universal, \ie~
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correlation functional truly universal, \ie,
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independent on the number of electrons in the FUEG, one could use the
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curvature of the Fermi hole~\cite{Loos_2017a} as an additional variable in the
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density-functional approximation. The development of such a
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generalized correlation eLDA is left for future work. Even though a similar strategy could be applied
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generalised correlation eLDA is left for future work. Even though a similar strategy could be applied
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to the weight-dependent exchange part, we
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explore in the present work a different path where the
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(system-dependent) exchange functional
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parameterization relies on the ensemble energy linearity
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parameterisation relies on the ensemble energy linearity
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constraint (see Sec.~\ref{subsubsec:weight-dep_x_fun}). Finally, let us
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stress that, in order to further
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improve the description of the ensemble correlation energy, a
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post-treatment of the recently
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revealed density-driven
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correlations~\cite{Gould_2019,Gould_2019_insights,gould_2020,Fromager_2020} [which, by construction, are absent
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from FUEGs] might be necessary. An orbital-dependent correction derived
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correlations~\cite{Gould_2019,Gould_2019_insights,gould_2020,Fromager_2020} (which, by construction, are absent
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from FUEGs) might be necessary. An orbital-dependent correction derived
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in Ref.~\onlinecite{Fromager_2020} might be
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used for that purpose. Work is currently in progress in this
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direction.\\
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@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ linear ensemble energy and, hence, the same value of the excitation energy indep
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\includegraphics[width=\linewidth]{fig1}
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\caption{
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\ce{H2} at equilibrium bond length: deviation from linearity of the ensemble energy $\E{}{\ew{}}$ (in hartree) as a function of $\ew{}$ for various functionals and the aug-cc-pVTZ basis set.
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See main text for the definition of the various functionals' acronyms.
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See main text for the definition of the various \alert{functionals'} acronyms.
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\label{fig:Ew_H2}
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}
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\end{figure}
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@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ linear ensemble energy and, hence, the same value of the excitation energy indep
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\includegraphics[width=\linewidth]{fig2}
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\caption{
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\ce{H2} at equilibrium bond length: error (with respect to FCI) in the excitation energy $\Ex{}{(2)}$ (in eV) associated with the doubly-excited state as a function of $\ew{}$ for various functionals and the aug-cc-pVTZ basis set.
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See main text for the definition of the various functionals' acronyms.
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See main text for the definition of the various \alert{functionals'} acronyms.
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\label{fig:Om_H2}
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}
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\end{figure}
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@ -553,24 +553,6 @@ makes the ensemble energy $\E{}{(0,\ew{2})}$ almost perfectly linear (by constru
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It also allows to ``flatten the curve'' making the excitation energy much more stable (with respect to
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$\ew{}$), and closer to the FCI reference (see yellow curve in
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Fig.~\ref{fig:Om_H2}).\\
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%
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%\manuf{One point is not clear to me at all. If I understood correctly,
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%the optimization of $\alpha$, $\beta$, and $\gamma$ is done for
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%$\ew{1}=0$. So, once the optimisation is done, we have a coefficient
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%$\Cx{\ew{2}}$ that is a function of $\ew{2}$. Then, how do you obtain
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%a coefficient $\Cx{\ew{}}$ that is supposed to describe a {\it
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%different} ensemble defined as $\ew{1}=\ew{2}=\ew{}$ (it says in the
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%computational details that, ultimately, this is what we are looking at)? Did you just
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%replace $\ew{2}$ by $\ew{}$? This should be clarified. Another point: in
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%order to apply Eq.~\eqref{eq:dEdw} for computing excitation energies,
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%you need $\ew{1}$ and $\ew{2}$ to be independent variables before
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%differentiating (and taking the value of the derivatives at
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%$\ew{1}=\ew{2}=\ew{}$). I do not see how you can do this (and generate
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%the results in Fig.~\ref{fig:Om_H2}) if the only ensemble functional you
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%have depends on $\ew{}$ and not on both $\ew{1}$ and $\ew{2}$. Regarding
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%Fig.~\ref{fig:Om_H2}, I would suspect
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%that you took $\ew{1}=0$, which is questionable and not clear at all from
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%the text.}
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The parameters $\alpha$, $\beta$, and $\gamma$ entering Eq.~\eqref{eq:Cxw} have been obtained via a least-square fit of the non-linear component of the ensemble energy computed between $\ew{2} = 0$ and $\ew{2} = 1$ by steps of $0.025$.
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Although this range of weights is inconsistent with GOK theory, we have found that it is important, from a practical point of view, to ensure a correct behaviour in the whole range of weights in order to obtain accurate excitation energies.
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@ -591,7 +573,8 @@ We enforce this type of \textit{exact} constraint (to the maximum possible exten
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As readily seen from Eq.~\eqref{eq:Cxw} and graphically illustrated in Fig.~\ref{fig:Cxw} (red curve), the weight-dependent correction does not affect the two ghost-interaction-free limits at $\ew{1} = \ew{2} = 0$ and $\ew{1} = 0 \land \ew{2} = 1$ (\ie, the pure-state limits), as $\Cx{\ew{2}}$ reduces to $\Cx{}$ in these two limits.
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Indeed, it is important to ensure that the weight-dependent functional does not alter these pure-state limits, which are genuine saddle points of the KS equations, as mentioned above.
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Finally, let us mention that, around $\ew{2} = 0$, the behaviour of Eq.~\eqref{eq:Cxw} is linear: this is the main feature that one needs to catch in order to get accurate excitation energies in the zero-weight limit.
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We shall come back to this point later on.
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\titou{Nonetheless, the CC-S functional also includes quadratic terms in order to compensate the spurious curvature of the ensemble energy originating, mainly, from the Hartree term [see Eq.~\eqref{eq:Hartree}].}
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%We shall come back to this point later on.
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%%% FIG 3 %%%
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\begin{figure}
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\subsubsection{Weight-independent correlation functional}
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%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
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Third, we include correlation effects via the conventional VWN5 local correlation functional. \cite{Vosko_1980}
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Third, we \titou{include} correlation effects via the conventional VWN5 local correlation functional. \cite{Vosko_1980}
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For the sake of clarity, the explicit expression of the VWN5 functional is not reported here but it can be found in Ref.~\onlinecite{Vosko_1980}.
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The combination of the (weight-independent) Slater and VWN5 functionals (SVWN5) yield a highly convex ensemble energy (green curve in Fig.~\ref{fig:Ew_H2}), while the combination of CC-S and VWN5 (CC-SVWN5) exhibit a smaller curvature and improved excitation energies (red curve in Figs.~\ref{fig:Ew_H2} and \ref{fig:Om_H2}), especially at small weights, where the CC-SVWN5 excitation energy is almost spot on.
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in the zero-weight limit (\ie, $\ew{} = 0$) and for equi-weights (\ie, $\ew{} = 1/3$).
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These excitation energies are computed using
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Eq.~\eqref{eq:dEdw}.
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%\manuf{OK but, again, how do you compute the exchange ensemble
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%derivative for both excited states when it seems like the functional in
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%Eqs.~\eqref{eq:ensemble_Slater_func} and \eqref{eq:Cxw}
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%only depends on $\ew{}$ rather than $\ew{1}$ AND $\ew{2}$.}
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For comparison, we also report results obtained with the linear interpolation method (LIM). \cite{Senjean_2015,Senjean_2016}
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The latter simply consists in extracting the excitation energies (which are
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\Ex{\LIM}{(2)} & = 3 \qty[\E{}{\bw{}=(1/3,1/3)} - \E{}{\bw{}=(1/2,0)}] + \frac{1}{2} \Ex{\LIM}{(1)}. \label{eq:LIM2}
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\end{align}
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\end{subequations}
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%\manu{
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%$\frac{1}{2}\Ex{\LIM}{(1)}=\frac{1}{2}\left(E_1-E_0\right)$\\
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%$\E{}{\bw{}=(1/3,1/3)}=\frac{1}{3}\left(E_0+E_1+E_2\right)$\\
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%$\E{}{\bw{}=(1/2,0)}=\frac{1}{2}\left(E_0+E_1\right)$\\
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%$3 \qty[\E{}{\bw{}=(1/3,1/3)} -
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%\E{}{\bw{}=(1/2,0)}]=-\frac{1}{2}\left(E_0+E_1\right)+E_2$
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%\\
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%$3 \qty[\E{}{\bw{}=(1/3,1/3)} -
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%\E{}{\bw{}=(1/2,0)}]+\frac{1}{2} \Ex{\LIM}{(1)}=E_2-E_0$
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%}\\
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For a general expression with multiple (and possibly degenerate) states, we refer the reader to Eq.~(106) of Ref.~\onlinecite{Senjean_2015}, where LIM is shown to interpolate linearly the ensemble energy between equi-ensembles.
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Note that two calculations are needed to get the first LIM excitation energy, with an additional equi-ensemble calculation for each higher excitation energy.
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It yields $\alpha = +0.019\,226$, $\beta = -0.017\,996$, and $\gamma = -0.022\,945$ [see Eq.~\eqref{eq:Cxw}].
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The weight dependence of $\Cx{\ew{2}}$ is illustrated in
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Fig.~\ref{fig:Cxw} (green curve).
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%\manuf{Again, it would be nice to say
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%explicitly if you construct a functional, function of $\ew{1}$ and
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%$\ew{2}$ (how then) or just $\ew{}$ (how to compute the separate
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%derivatives then?)}
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One clearly sees that the correction brought by CC-S is much more gentle than at $\RHH = 1.4$ bohr, which means that the ensemble energy obtained with the LDA exchange functional is much more linear at $\RHH = 3.7$ bohr.
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%In other words, the curvature ``hole'' depicted in Fig.~\ref{fig:Cxw} is thus much more shallow at stretched geometry.
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Table \ref{tab:BigTab_H2st} reports, for the aug-cc-pVTZ basis set (which delivers basis set converged results), the same set of calculations as in Table \ref{tab:BigTab_H2}.
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As a reference value, we computed a FCI/aug-cc-pV5Z excitation energy of $8.69$ eV, which compares well with previous studies. \cite{Senjean_2015}
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For $\RHH = 3.7$ bohr, it is much harder to get an accurate estimate of the excitation energy, the closest match being reached with HF exchange and VWN5 correlation at equi-weights.
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%\manu{We did not mention HF exchange neither in the theory section nor
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%in the computational details. We should be clear about this. Is this an
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%ad-hoc correction, like in our previous work on ringium? Is HF exchange
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%used for the full ensemble energy (i.e. the HF interaction energy is
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%computed with the ensemble density matrix and therefore with
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%ghost-interaction errors) or for
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%individual energies (that you state-average then), like in our previous
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%work. I guess the latter option is what you did. We need to explain more
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%what we do!!!}
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As expected from the linearity of the ensemble energy, the CC-S functional coupled or not with a correlation functional yield extremely stable excitation energies as a function of the weight, with only a few tenths of eV difference between the zero- and equi-weights limits.
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As a direct consequence of this linearity, LIM and MOM
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do not provide any noticeable improvement on the excitation
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\item
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{Not clear what density is used in equation 21: From the discussion that follows this appears to not be the ensemble density (which is weight dependent and I would expect it to be used here) but the density only for the ground state Slater determinant. The authors should explain why this is so. }
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\alert{The density $n$ used in Eq.~(21), (9), (10) can be any density and does not represent any specific density.
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In the case of Eq.~(21), we simply present the well-known Dirac-exchange density functional and, by definition of a density functional, does not need to specify in its formulation to which density it is applied but only that it is a mathematical object applying to any density $n(r)$.
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Of course, when we will use this functional or any other one in
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our work we will surely apply it to the {\it minimizing} ensemble density
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$n^w(r)$ [see Eqs. (5) and (11)] and the notation will be carefully modified accordingly.}
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\alert{The density $n$ used in Eqs.~(21), (9), (10) can be any density, and, mathematically, there is no need to specify its origin.
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In the case of Eq.~(21), we simply define the well-known Dirac exchange functional.
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By definition of a density functional, we do not need to specify in its formulation to which density it is applied but only that it is a mathematical object applying to any density $n(r)$.
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Of course, when using this functional (or any other ones) in our work we surely apply it to the {\it minimizing} ensemble density $n^w(r)$ [see Eqs. (5) and (11)] and the notation is carefully modified accordingly.}
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\item
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{Change "Third, we add up correlation effects" to "Third, we include correlation effects"}
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{They need to be a bit more consistent with their notation as in equation 9 and elsewhere "$n(r)$" should be the ensemble (weight-dependent) density "$n^w(r)$".
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I don?t believe they defined "$n(r)$" in the paper so I don?t know which density it represents. }
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I don't believe they defined "$n(r)$" in the paper so I don?t know which density it represents. }
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\alert{See our response to 4.}
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\alert{See our response to 3.}
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{Even if it sounds trivial, they should explain why the exact xc functional should have linear dependence in the excitation energies as a function of the weight value.}
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\alert{GOK variational principle states that the expectation value of the ensemble energy admits/possesses a lower bond which is linear with respect to each of the ensemble-weights $w_i$ and is the exact ensemble energy of the studied system (equation 1).
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Moreover, by construction, one can easily see that the slope of the exact ensemble energy with respect to a specific weight $w_i$ corresponds to the excitation energy of the system defined between the ground state and the ith-excited state associated to this specific weight (equation 4).
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\alert{As clearly stated in the original manuscript, GOK variational principle states that the expectation value of the ensemble energy admits a lower bond which is linear with respect to each of the ensemble weight $w_I$ and is the exact ensemble energy of the studied system [Eq.~(1)].
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Moreover, by construction, one can easily see that the slope of the exact ensemble energy with respect to a specific weight $w_I$ corresponds to the excitation energy of the system defined between the ground state and the $I$th excited state associated to this specific weight [Eq.~(4)].
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It is important that the reader keeps in mind that the exact excitation energies are based on pure-state energies and, therefore, do not depend on the weights of the ensemble.
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In practice, the ensemble energy is rarely w-linear (linear in w ?) because of the use of approximate xc-functionals.
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Indeed, by inserting the ensemble density in the Hartree interaction functional (equation 9), it introduces spurious quadratic curvature with respect to the weight in the ensemble energy.
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Some of those terms are responsible of the unphysical phenomenon called ghost-interaction errors.
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Therefore, the ensemble-Khon-Sham gap obtained at the end of the ensemble-HF-calculation is, somehow, "weight-contaminated" and doesn't possess the right weight-dependence.
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(two first terms of the right-hand side of equation16)
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By taking its first derivative with regard to the weight, the xc-functional is expected to compensate those parasite-quadratic terms in order to retrieve the linear behavior of the exact ensemble energy and one can understand that only a weight-dependant xc-functional could do so.
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At the best of my knowledge, I cannot see any reason why the xc-functional should be w-linear.
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The important idea is that the linearity must be in the ensemble energy but the main constraint on the xc-functional should be that it is weight-dependant.
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We emphasize that only the exact ensemble-xc-functional would have the ideal weight-dependency that would make the corresponding ensemble energy reproduce perfectly the linear behavior of the exact ensemble energy and lead to weight-independant excitation energies, that is exact excitation energies.
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The use of an approximate weight-dependant xc-functional could reduce the ensemble energy curvature and give less weight-dependant excitation energies but it is reasonable to admit that it also could make things worse it the weight-dependency of the functional is poorly chosen.
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That is why the construction of "good" weight-dependant
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xc-functionals is a really challenging matter in eDFT.\\
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As a final comment, we insist after Eq. (28) on the fact that, in the
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exact theory, the xc ensemble density functional has no reason to vary (for a fixed density $n$)
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linearly with the ensemble weights. We refer to Ref. 92 where exact
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expressions for the individual xc energies are derived.}
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In practice, the ensemble energy is rarely linear in $w$ because of the approximate nature of the xc functionals.
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Indeed, by inserting the ensemble density in the Hartree interaction functional [Eq.~(9)], one introduces, in the ensemble energy, spurious quadratic curvature with respect to the weight.
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Some of those terms are responsible of the unphysical phenomenon called ghost interaction, as explained in the manuscript.
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Therefore, the ensemble Khon-Sham gap is, somehow, "weight contaminated" and does not possess the correct weight dependence [see first two terms of the right-hand side of Eq.~(16)].
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By taking its derivative with respect to the weight, the weight-dependent xc functional is expected to compensate those spurious quadratic terms in order to retrieve a linear behavior of the exact ensemble energy: only a weight-dependent xc functional can achieve such a feat.
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In other words, the xc functional does not have to be linear with respect to $w$.
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We have clarified this point in the revised manuscript.
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We emphasize that the exact ensemble xc functional has the ideal weight dependency, and would make the corresponding ensemble energy perfectly linear, hence leading to weight-independent excitation energies.
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As shown in the present manuscript, the use of an approximate weight-dependent xc functional reduces the ensemble energy curvature as well as the variation of the excitation energies with respect to $w$.
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This illustrates why the construction of reliable weight-dependent xc functionals is a challenging task in eDFT.
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As a final comment, we insist after Eq.~(28) on the fact that, in the exact theory, the xc ensemble density functional has no reason to vary (for a fixed density $n$) linearly with the ensemble weights.
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We refer to Ref.~92 where exact expressions for the individual xc energies are derived.}
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\end{enumerate}
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